I’m studying and need help with a English question to help me learn.

part 1:

How trimmed are your sources? Are they embedded in your research conversation? Discuss specific elements of the research process that seem frustrating (or exciting) as you work through putting it all together.

Part 2: (all the pics for part2)

Read the student sample paper, p. 634 and discuss its presentation:
Review the introduction—how effective is the story/scenario the writer uses?
Discuss the effect of anecdotes in arguments? Did you include any in your research? For what purpose?