I’m studying for my Article Writing class and need an explanation.

The paper need to be rewritten. The topic is about the influence of e-commerce in fashion retail.

Must follow the step that I upload in the file and the feedback”Topic is not clear and not complete either. Fashion of what? What about it? What is the agenda? Where is your introduction? Abstract? -3 No citation of reading ist in objective statement. -2 Literature review? -3 Methodology? -3 What about company development? Is this your analysis? If so, it is not credible> I think you never read the guidelines for research paper writing I have posted and went over that details in the class so many times. -15 Conclusion without credible analysis doesn’t count. -3″